Ron's new contest gave me the motivation to finally get off my rear-end and make a youtube commercial. I'd love your constructive criticism on this piece, its my second effort at making a video.
Biggest concern is that it may be too long, and some of the slides may be "too wordy."
-- Edited by swee****erfish on Monday 3rd of January 2011 08:16:22 PM
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Looks great, nice job. Generally I just make sure that I have enough time to read each slide, and run with that. I think its a home run for only being you second attempt. Keep up the good work!